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I compose this poem, because I said; Her showing, drove my mind to bed. I know that innocence was her way; But we, the men, believe that's prey. So, careful woman, when you expose; Our watching eyes, often suppose. I guess that sounds so immature; I know you all hate to endure. :)

#1: Tom O'Connell (sensei69) on Jul 4, 2010

I bet i'm in trouble this time.

It's actually not offensive. At least to me. It does sound like a warning though with words like "careful" and "prey." I feel like there is some understanding of the woman's side of the story and I do appreciate that.

Well, I don't know if you're in trouble or nor, because I can't figure out what the image is. Must be my timeless innocence...

thanks Alison
lol Cynthia .... timeless huh!

Love the poem.. didn't understand the pic until i looked at it crosseyed after reading the poem but I'll give ya props anyway. I don't see how you'd be in trouble for this.. its nice to know a man can speak the truth.

Very poor image.

blackcat said it right

New version published by sensei69.

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Some women who are nice
Inadvertently entice.
They expose a bit much,
Inviting a touch.
Tom was good to refrain,
Kept the bed in his brain.
Yet all this while,
Showed a logical smile.

:-)

Creepy.

WOW... cool poem of reticence T
lol Martin

Hmmmmmmm...so that's what you look like with "bedhead" Tom! lol

Nice poem Teresa

Teresa you and Tom are made for each other. I know I recommended Martin a while back and it didn't work out. I'm right this time, it's T+T.

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lol..finally see this lol jota

And it's SO funny now!

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