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Comments on Puzzle #29431: She's big enough for ball games
By Roisin Clark (RC-bunny)

peek at solution       solve puzzle
  version: 2    quality:   difficulty:   solvability: line & color logic only  

Puzzle Description:

Little mermaid

#1: Aurelian Ginkgo (AurelianGinkgo) on Feb 16, 2017 [SPOILER]

Your puzzle was enjoyable, but if you are open to some constructive criticism about drawing, I'd like to offer some friendly, well-meant advice. Look at pictures of Ariel (or any girl) and notice that there is more curve to her shape. Taper her waist a bit - that is, make it thinner - so that she has a more feminine figure. This will take your art to the next level.
#2: Web Paint-By-Number Robot (webpbn) on Mar 1, 2017
New version published by RC-bunny.
#3: Roisin Clark (RC-bunny) on Mar 1, 2017
Again, edited to get rid of the "?"
#4: Aurelian Ginkgo (AurelianGinkgo) on Mar 1, 2017
Nice improvement! I also appreciate that it is now entirely logically solvable. Honestly, her expression is more attractive now, too, because of the more subtle smile, rather than the big grin. ^-^
#5: Jota (jota) on Mar 2, 2017
Well done!
#6: Roisin Clark (RC-bunny) on Mar 2, 2017
Thanks guys, I'm much happier with this now.
#7: Web Paint-By-Number Robot (webpbn) on Mar 3, 2017
Unpublished by RC-bunny
#8: Web Paint-By-Number Robot (webpbn) on Mar 3, 2017
Republished without change by RC-bunny
#9: Susan Duncan (medic25733) on Mar 23, 2017
Well done
#10: Kristen Vognild (kristen) on Apr 12, 2017
I love the way the shells turned out!

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